Ok i write a bit so please read this story and tell me what you think. pardon the lack of periods english was not my best highschool class. constructive criticism is desperately wanted! as i was walking through the woods one day i stumbled upon a beautiful glade in this open area of trees is a lake with a waterfall pouring into it as i walked around the lake to the water fall i listened to the peaceful songs of birds singing in the background as i approached the waterfall i noticed a small island just outside the waterfall but shrouded in its mist as i approached it i noticed that the sun had set and the moon was high in the sky but i was intent on that little island i looked out into the lake and saw the full moon reflecting of its smooth glassy surface i kept on walking and as i got closer i noticed a moonbow in the mist surrounding the island with its rainbow like shape oh it was painstakingly beautiful like some one drew it on a canvas and i noticed in the moonlight there was something on the island i got even closer and i noticed it was a female laying out on the island seeming to bathe in the light of the moon as i approach dit was none other than the woman of my dreams it was you i noticed though that you had no clothes on nor was there any in sight like you were there waiting for me you beckoned to me and so i did the only thing i could think of i stripped down and swam out there you had no shame so why should i at last i made it out to the island it was instantly warmer and i was dry as a bone i saw your eyes the eyes that only a goddess could have you beckoned me to approach and as i did you laid down showing me all your wondrous beauty as i got closer i felt compelled to crawl towards you slowly so if this is a dream it wont shatter and fade when i got next to you, you whispered that you were there just for me and let me have my way with you i kissed you with such longing like a man dying of thirst before this lake and then i kissed your bottom lip then your chin kissing under it right down your center "oh how beautiful you are" down to your chest in which i had to lightly grasp one of your breasts i started kissing around the other ones nipple watching it pop up then i gently nibbled it listening to you moans as i slid my right hand down your side feeling the curve of your soft place i brought it up a little i kissed down your stomach getting to your belly button and kissed then ran my tongue over it i worked my kisses down to your center kissing around it the as i finished the circle i kissed slowly and sucking slightly every time i pulled my lips away till i reached the bottom then id slide my tongue in all the way curling in you till it was back in my mouth "oh how you taste!" then id start toying just inside of you to hit your personal place every time id keep going till you came into my mouth id enjoy every drop and i noticed a tad ran down our center so i toy that up to you very tip then as i got it all id run the tip of my tongue all the way up the center to your chin kissing it and then kissing your lips and as the kiss just finished id slowly enter into you going all the way in and id listen for your gasp of pleasure and joy then id slowly start thrusting in and out all the way to my tip and in to my waist picking up the pace to your gasps id thrust as you breathe in and pull as you exhaled and i would keep the pace till we both came then as i lay beside you, you told me i must carry you into the waterfall so i picked you up and carried you into and through it and behind the vale of water was a bedroom with a beautiful 4 poster bed with lace lining and a featherdown mattress i saw in your eyes that you wanted more so i lay you onto your bed and i crawled in beside you, you surprised me by rolling on top of me saying it was your way now and you slid your self down my body inserting me into you, you started riding me watching me with those eyes like no other i have ever seen you pick up the pace a bit i hold on to your soft place to keep you steady on me and as you go faster you lean back moaning and arching your back till we both came and you collapsed onto my chest i held you in my arms you looked up in those eyes i saw my life with you as your jewel and me beside your throne forever yours and i started felling dizzy so i closed my eyes and as i opened them i was in the woods with my clothes beside me and your voice and smell being carried away in the wind as i hear you words of "thank you"